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Faizan
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Shair sochon ke dareechon me nehaan hote hain..
Shair hote hain to jazbaat bayaan hote hain...
Rasm e guftar me jal jate hain sab khwab o khayal..
Raakh hote hain kabhi jal ke dhuaan hote hain..
Lafz hain in ka badan aur sukhan in ka lahoo..
Ghazl ke saaye me pal kar ye jawaan hote hain..
In se khulte hain dilon k sabhi raazo arsan..
Zulm ki aah muhabbat ki zubaan hote hain..
Dil me to gham ka samandar hai ek behne ko..
Ik bahana hai ye aansu jo rawaan hote hain..
Nahi Faizan tujh me pehlon sa andaz e bayan..
Tere shairon me bhi wo shair kahaan hote hain..
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CONS
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wah khoob kahi...
her kisi say kahan yoon bayan hotay hain
shair goee kay yeh andaz kahan hotay hain
mazrat kay saath faizan bhai aap ki zameen per aap ko reply dainay ki koshish karta honn---- |
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Faizan
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| Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 6:25 pm Post subject: arey nahi |
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are nahi thanx cons bhai aap jaise chahen aap ki marzi sorry wali koi baat nahi balke mujhe acha lagta hai ..
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soha_so_cute
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| Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 6:41 pm Post subject: arey |
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Faizan g aap kis duniya sy hain? hamaari duniya mein to aesey log nahin hoty,, its great of your poetry and u...
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adi_dhoop
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| Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 3:35 pm Post subject: Re: Shair |
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| Faizan wrote: | Shair sochon ke dareechon me nehaan hote hain..
Shair hote hain to jazbaat bayaan hote hain...
Rasm e guftar me jal jate hain sab khwab o khayal..
Raakh hote hain kabhi jal ke dhuaan hote hain..
Lafz hain in ka badan aur sukhan in ka lahoo..
Ghazl ke saaye me pal kar ye jawaan hote hain..
In se khulte hain dilon k sabhi raazo arsan..
Zulm ki aah muhabbat ki zubaan hote hain..
Dil me to gham ka samandar hai ek behne ko..
Ik bahana hai ye aansu jo rawaan hote hain..
Nahi Faizan tujh me pehlon sa andaz e bayan..
Tere shairon me bhi wo shair kahaan hote hain.. |
nice
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Faizan
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| Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 11:38 pm Post subject: thanx |
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thanx dhoop aur soha mai to aam sa insaan hon mujh me koi aisi khas baat nahi hai ok.
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madho_74
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| Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 6:41 pm Post subject: |
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WaaaaaaOoOoOoOoOoOoO
ITS SO BEAUTIFUL FAIZII BHAYA
MAIN ITNA CHA KB LIKHON GE PATA NAHI 
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soha_so_cute
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| Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 3:50 pm Post subject: ham |
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Madhoo jee ham seekhen Faizan se poetry aap in se kahain na aap ki maan lain ge main ne kaha tha to boley dekh kar seekh Lon
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AaiNa
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suprbbbbbbbbbb
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adi_dhoop
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| Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 11:35 pm Post subject: Re: ham |
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| soha_so_cute wrote: | | Madhoo jee ham seekhen Faizan se poetry aap in se kahain na aap ki maan lain ge main ne kaha tha to boley dekh kar seekh Lon |
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madho_74
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| Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 12:15 am Post subject: Re: ham |
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| adi_dhoop wrote: | | soha_so_cute wrote: | | Madhoo jee ham seekhen Faizan se poetry aap in se kahain na aap ki maan lain ge main ne kaha tha to boley dekh kar seekh Lon |
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buri bat dhop siso
 bohat buri baat
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Faizan
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| Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 10:52 am Post subject: boht |
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boht hansi aa rahi hai aap dono ko???? hans lo bachu hans lo...
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soha_so_cute
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| Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 8:33 pm Post subject: faizu ji |
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shair...... hum pr b to kch kaho na g kabi 
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