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shji
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Mohabat jaise ibaadat ban gye hai...........
tujy chahty rehna mair adaat ban gye hai
wafa k perahan main hain hijar or tanhai
khalwatee injuman munajaat ban gye hai
wo badlta ha lehja shab o rooz k aasar se
us k zere-o-bam mai rehna mairi ibdat ban gye hai
saleeb mohabat yun lai kar chala hun ya Rab
lahoo detian mekhain mari lazzat ban gye hai
ye toota sa liehja yeh jhukhi hoi se nigahain
“ Rubayee” zeesast ka haasil ban gye hai
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mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan
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Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Shji Bauhat Khoob:)
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CONS
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hmmm very nice...achi lagi...
khas karrrrr...
wafa k perahan main hain hijar or tanhai
khalwatee injuman munajaat ban gye hai
bus yeh injuman samajh nahi aaya ghaliban anjuman hay ??
"wo badlta ha lehja shab o rooz k aasar se" uss kay bad walay misray may khayal acha hay magar wazan nahi hay...
overall very nice..........keep it up |
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arshad
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bahut khoooob ,,, keep gud postin ,, next time  |
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arshad
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| niceeeeeeeeee ,,,, yaar cons on line shayery sikhaa rehy ho,, us bandy ka kya huwa jis ko kahaa tha k tery shayery main wazen nahi us bechaary ne khaa khaa k wazen 120 ker liya shayeery nahi aaye |
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CONS
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| arshad wrote: | | niceeeeeeeeee ,,,, yaar cons on line shayery sikhaa rehy ho,, us bandy ka kya huwa jis ko kahaa tha k tery shayery main wazen nahi us bechaary ne khaa khaa k wazen 120 ker liya shayeery nahi aaye |
lolzzzzzz ...yaar sikha nahi raha jo seekha hay wo bata raha hon  |
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adi_dhoop
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| Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 9:16 pm Post subject: Re: MAIRI IBAADAT |
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| shji wrote: |
Mohabat jaise ibaadat ban gye hai...........
tujy chahty rehna mair adaat ban gye hai
wafa k perahan main hain hijar or tanhai
khalwatee injuman munajaat ban gye hai
wo badlta ha lehja shab o rooz k aasar se
us k zere-o-bam mai rehna mairi ibdat ban gye hai
saleeb mohabat yun lai kar chala hun ya Rab
lahoo detian mekhain mari lazzat ban gye hai
ye toota sa liehja yeh jhukhi hoi se nigahain
“ Rubayee” zeesast ka haasil ban gye hai
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[color=orange]muje toh janab pori poem hi passand aai hai...............  [/color]
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Faizan
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| Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 6:21 pm Post subject: Re: MAIRI IBAADAT |
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| shji wrote: |
Mohabat jaise ibaadat ban gye hai...........
tujy chahty rehna mair adaat ban gye hai
wafa k perahan main hain hijar or tanhai
khalwatee injuman munajaat ban gye hai
wo badlta ha lehja shab o rooz k aasar se
us k zere-o-bam mai rehna mairi ibdat ban gye hai
saleeb mohabat yun lai kar chala hun ya Rab
lahoo detian mekhain mari lazzat ban gye hai
ye toota sa liehja yeh jhukhi hoi se nigahain
“ Rubayee” zeesast ka haasil ban gye hai
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.karte hain jo kehte hain shji is not a great poet 
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shji
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THNXXXXXXX but no THNXXXXXXXXXX |
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