PtvChat Where Fun Never ENds... !! www.ptvchat.com Family Chat Server    FAQ   Search   Memberlist   Usergroups   Register   Profile   Log in to check your private messages   Log in  Meri PEhli Nazam! Goto page 1, 2  Next          PtvChat Where Fun Never ENds... !! www.ptvchat.com Forum Index -> Andaz-e-Bayan Or View previous topic :: View next topic   Author Message mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan VIP Member Joined: 08 May 2007 Posts: 3338 Location: Lahore Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 11:06 am    Post subject: Meri PEhli Nazam! As salam o aleikum! Friends yEa meri pehli likhi hui nazam hay. JO ke Main ne likh to avein di thi aur us ka sir pair hi nahi tha aur ab yea nazam pori tor per tyar ho gai hay mean Isayyyy Meri Bauhat hi pyari har dil azeez ( DHOoP ) NE Sahi kar ke AIk Nai ShakAl Di hay So MAIn usay ap sab ke samnay Paish kar raha hon Umeed hay ke AP sab zaroor comments dain ge aur main Umeed karta hon JO Is Post main aein wo REply kar ke hi wapis jaein Shukaria Baqi Sara Creditttttttttt IS nazam ka meri Dostttttttttttttttttt DHoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooop KO jata hay TO meri YE PEhli NAzam DHoop kE naam Soochta hoon main younhi raat din Ubharti hai khawish nanahi si dil mai Kabhi Kabhi Koi ho aesa hamdam Jo rakhey muje apni chahtoon main Rahay sath mere jo gham ki ratoon mai Jo bane mere ansoon ka razdar HO Sulagti ratoon mai dharkanoon ke qareeb JO ban jaye mere sapnoon ka razdar jo kare piyar ;;PAL ;;ko zindgi se berh ker......... Soochta hoon main younhi raat din Bas hai yahi khawish iss nanhe se dil mai... _________________ Back to top Faizan Moderator Joined: 05 May 2008 Posts: 329 Location: LAHORE Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 11:12 am    Post subject: gud Simply Great!!!!! _________________ Back to top NaYafT Moderator Joined: 01 Jul 2007 Posts: 1693 Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 11:51 am    Post subject: wah ji wah..bohot hi khub.. yeh nanha sa dil hai ya kia..hkuwahishen ubharti hi arahi hain is main to..hehehe bohot khub..pehli hai aur itni achi... ab agli kab arahi hai? _________________ Back to top mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan VIP Member Joined: 08 May 2007 Posts: 3338 Location: Lahore Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 12:20 pm    Post subject: Re: gud Faizan wrote: Simply Great!!!!! hmmmmm Thanks _________________ Back to top mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan VIP Member Joined: 08 May 2007 Posts: 3338 Location: Lahore Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 12:37 pm    Post subject: NaYafT wrote: wah ji wah..bohot hi khub.. yeh nanha sa dil hai ya kia..hkuwahishen ubharti hi arahi hain is main to..hehehe bohot khub..pehli hai aur itni achi... ab agli kab arahi hai? lols yea nanha sa dil DHOop ne hi banaya hay Sari POetry Dhoop ne banai hay Us KI Tareef karo Main ne jo Galt malt likha tha us kI shakal badal ke kamal ki poetry bana di DDDDDDDDDDDDDDHooP NE All credit Jata hay meri pali C DHoop kO AGli hmmmmmmmmm INsha Allah jald hi Per pehlay is ke to COmments anay do _________________ Back to top adi_dhoop Site Admin Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 909 Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 3:15 pm    Post subject: Re: Meri PEhli Nazam! mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan wrote: As salam o aleikum! Friends yEa meri pehli likhi hui nazam hay. JO ke Main ne likh to avein di thi aur us ka sir pair hi nahi tha aur ab yea nazam pori tor per tyar ho gai hay mean Isayyyy Meri Bauhat hi pyari har dil azeez ( DHOoP ) NE Sahi kar ke AIk Nai ShakAl Di hay So MAIn usay ap sab ke samnay Paish kar raha hon Umeed hay ke AP sab zaroor comments dain ge aur main Umeed karta hon JO Is Post main aein wo REply kar ke hi wapis jaein Shukaria Baqi Sara Creditttttttttt IS nazam ka meri Dostttttttttttttttttt DHoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooop KO jata hay TO meri YE PEhli NAzam DHoop kE naam Soochta hoon main younhi raat din Ubharti hai khawish nanahi si dil mai Kabhi Kabhi Koi ho aesa hamdam Jo rakhey muje apni chahtoon main Rahay sath mere jo gham ki ratoon mai Jo bane mere ansoon ka razdar HO Sulagti ratoon mai dharkanoon ke qareeb JO ban jaye mere sapnoon ka razdar jo kare piyar ;;PAL ;;ko zindgi se berh ker......... Soochta hoon main younhi raat din Bas hai yahi khawish iss nanhe se dil mai... paloooooooooooo mai ne kuch nai kiya............ilfaz tumhare thay....khiyalt tumhare thay........khawishen tumhari thin..........dhoop ne tou un ka hasher nasher kiy hai bassssssssssss....ALLAHA tumhre fun mai or nikhar dae.....amin _________________ Back to top adi_dhoop Site Admin Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 909 Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 3:20 pm    Post subject: mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan wrote: NaYafT wrote: wah ji wah..bohot hi khub.. yeh nanha sa dil hai ya kia..hkuwahishen ubharti hi arahi hain is main to..hehehe bohot khub..pehli hai aur itni achi... ab agli kab arahi hai? lols yea nanha sa dil DHOop ne hi banaya hay Sari POetry Dhoop ne banai hay Us KI Tareef karo Main ne jo Galt malt likha tha us kI shakal badal ke kamal ki poetry bana di DDDDDDDDDDDDDDHooP NE All credit Jata hay meri pali C DHoop kO AGli hmmmmmmmmm INsha Allah jald hi Per pehlay is ke to COmments anay do bas na ab...............or nai bolna keh dhoop ne kiya,dhoop ka kamal hai waghere waghera........tum ne tou bahut kuch kiya hai dhoop ke liy..........mai ne tou hasher nasher kiya hai tumhare khiyalat ka _________________ Back to top mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan VIP Member Joined: 08 May 2007 Posts: 3338 Location: Lahore Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 10:21 am    Post subject: Re: Meri PEhli Nazam! adi_dhoop wrote: mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan wrote: As salam o aleikum! Friends yEa meri pehli likhi hui nazam hay. JO ke Main ne likh to avein di thi aur us ka sir pair hi nahi tha aur ab yea nazam pori tor per tyar ho gai hay mean Isayyyy Meri Bauhat hi pyari har dil azeez ( DHOoP ) NE Sahi kar ke AIk Nai ShakAl Di hay So MAIn usay ap sab ke samnay Paish kar raha hon Umeed hay ke AP sab zaroor comments dain ge aur main Umeed karta hon JO Is Post main aein wo REply kar ke hi wapis jaein Shukaria Baqi Sara Creditttttttttt IS nazam ka meri Dostttttttttttttttttt DHoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooop KO jata hay TO meri YE PEhli NAzam DHoop kE naam Soochta hoon main younhi raat din Ubharti hai khawish nanahi si dil mai Kabhi Kabhi Koi ho aesa hamdam Jo rakhey muje apni chahtoon main Rahay sath mere jo gham ki ratoon mai Jo bane mere ansoon ka razdar HO Sulagti ratoon mai dharkanoon ke qareeb JO ban jaye mere sapnoon ka razdar jo kare piyar ;;PAL ;;ko zindgi se berh ker......... Soochta hoon main younhi raat din Bas hai yahi khawish iss nanhe se dil mai... paloooooooooooo mai ne kuch nai kiya............ilfaz tumhare thay....khiyalt tumhare thay........khawishen tumhari thin..........dhoop ne tou un ka hasher nasher kiy hai bassssssssssss....ALLAHA tumhre fun mai or nikhar dae.....amin Dhooppppppppp THi to yea Sab ilfaz, Khuwahshein & Khayalat Sidhay ho gaye warna to in ka sar pair hi nahi tha. yaar DHoop Tery bina meri poetry kuch bi nahi TUjay pata hay na tum MEri kitniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii pyarai dost ho TO MEri pOEtry bi TUjh se hi hay NOW aesa nahi kehna ke TUm NE kuch nahi kia Sab tum ne kia hay samjhi? n sab karnay k liye kOI thanks nahi bass kia mean kia _________________ Back to top mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan VIP Member Joined: 08 May 2007 Posts: 3338 Location: Lahore Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 10:25 am    Post subject: adi_dhoop wrote: mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan wrote: NaYafT wrote: wah ji wah..bohot hi khub.. yeh nanha sa dil hai ya kia..hkuwahishen ubharti hi arahi hain is main to..hehehe bohot khub..pehli hai aur itni achi... ab agli kab arahi hai? lols yea nanha sa dil DHOop ne hi banaya hay Sari POetry Dhoop ne banai hay Us KI Tareef karo Main ne jo Galt malt likha tha us kI shakal badal ke kamal ki poetry bana di DDDDDDDDDDDDDDHooP NE All credit Jata hay meri pali C DHoop kO AGli hmmmmmmmmm INsha Allah jald hi Per pehlay is ke to COmments anay do bas na ab...............or nai bolna keh dhoop ne kiya,dhoop ka kamal hai waghere waghera........tum ne tou bahut kuch kiya hai dhoop ke liy..........mai ne tou hasher nasher kiya hai tumhare khiyalat ka koi hashar nashar nahi kia tum ne kamal kar dia hay Dekha nayafat ne kya kha k pehli hay aur kamal hay SO is ka credit tujay jata hay na my Sweet Friendooooooooooo ab agli post karein ge jaldi Usay bi sahi karna TUjay don ga Us kO bi payara bana daina apne jesa:) _________________ Back to top adi_dhoop Site Admin Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 909 Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:47 pm    Post subject: hmmmmmmmmmm nawazish aap ki....hum na thay iss qabil.....keh sarahey jate _________________ Back to top mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan VIP Member Joined: 08 May 2007 Posts: 3338 Location: Lahore Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:57 pm    Post subject: adi_dhoop wrote: hmmmmmmmmmm nawazish aap ki....hum na thay iss qabil.....keh sarahey jate nawazish aap ki....hmmmmmmmm Chalo jab ap ki hay to Sahi hay MIss Dhoop! _________________ Back to top aiqan-e-gohar Moderator Joined: 24 Jun 2008 Posts: 398 Location: kitaabon aur khayalon main Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 7:19 pm    Post subject: Re: Meri PEhli Nazam! mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan wrote: As salam o aleikum! Friends yEa meri pehli likhi hui nazam hay. JO ke Main ne likh to avein di thi aur us ka sir pair hi nahi tha aur ab yea nazam pori tor per tyar ho gai hay mean Isayyyy Meri Bauhat hi pyari har dil azeez ( DHOoP ) NE Sahi kar ke AIk Nai ShakAl Di hay So MAIn usay ap sab ke samnay Paish kar raha hon Umeed hay ke AP sab zaroor comments dain ge aur main Umeed karta hon JO Is Post main aein wo REply kar ke hi wapis jaein Shukaria Baqi Sara Creditttttttttt IS nazam ka meri Dostttttttttttttttttt DHoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooop KO jata hay TO meri YE PEhli NAzam DHoop kE naam Sochta hoon main yunhi raat din Ubharti hai khuwahish nanahi si dil mai Kabhi Kabhi Koi ho aisa humdum Jo rakhey mujhe apni chahatoon main Rahay sath mere jo ghum ki raatoon mai Jo banay mere ansuoon ka raazdar HO Sulagti raatoon mai dharkanoon ke qareeb JO ban jaye mere sapnoon ka raazdar jo kare piyar ;;PAL ;;ko zindgi se barh ker......... Soochta hoon main yunhi raat din Bas hai yahi khuwahish iss nanhay se dil mai... Pal bohat achha likha hai aur dhoop tum ne bohat achha guide kiya hai main ne bhi bohat martaba likhnay ki koshish ki lekin likh hi nahi saki kiya karun jab bhi likhnay baith'ti hoon kuch samajh hi nahi aata bas aik chhota sa shair likha tha kabhi ase hi baithay baithay share karun gi tum logon se ok you guys have done a great job _________________ Back to top adi_dhoop Site Admin Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 909 Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:49 am    Post subject: lubbi yar poetry likhne k liy soochne ki zaroorat nai hoti...........ye tou feelings hain inn ko feel kero or paper p utar lo .........or achi achi si booke read kero.....wazan aa jae ga poetry mai _________________ Back to top shji Active Member Joined: 13 Feb 2008 Posts: 104 Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 12:15 pm    Post subject: lolzzzzzzzzzzzz app to sekha kay chorain gi dhoop ji pal ko Back to top aiqan-e-gohar Moderator Joined: 24 Jun 2008 Posts: 398 Location: kitaabon aur khayalon main Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 7:41 am    Post subject: adi_dhoop wrote: lubbi yar poetry likhne k liy soochne ki zaroorat nai hoti...........ye tou feelings hain inn ko feel kero or paper p utar lo .........or achi achi si booke read kero.....wazan aa jae ga poetry mai Main lubbi nahi aiqan hoon dhoop _________________ Back to top Display posts from previous: All Posts1 Day7 Days2 Weeks1 Month3 Months6 Months1 Year Oldest FirstNewest First         PtvChat Where Fun Never ENds... !! www.ptvchat.com Forum Index -> Andaz-e-Bayan Or All times are GMT + 5 Hours Goto page 1, 2  Next Page 1 of 2   Jump to: Select a forum Shout Box----------------Shout box Adminz----------------Admin & Mods Zone Member Corner----------------Taruf PleaseDuas, Wishes, AfsoosNews and ViewsAdds ALL member are requsted to click on ADDS atleast once a DAY ! Duniya-e-Islam----------------Quran-O-SunnahTareekh-e-Islam Mauj Masti----------------BaithakInterview ZoneBaatain ShaatainEID MUBARAKGud GudiLove $ AdvicesGender war ::Bazm-e-Sukhan::----------------Mehfil-e-MoshairaMeri PasandAndaz-e-Bayan OrMazahi-a-ShairiEnglish PoetryDesigned PoetryPunjabi PoetryOur Painting Bazm-e-Adab----------------Novels, Afsaana, DramaReading RoomInspirational Stories Arts & Entertainment----------------Halla GullaImage GalleryMovies & MusicOnline And Download Movies Life & Society----------------Fashion & StylesHealth & Beauty TipsKitchen Corner IT World----------------Mobile MastiComputer Corner Ptvchat Administration----------------Ptvchat RulesHelp Line and Feedback!Announcements & UpdatesAdvertising SEction LocK! mAnahil Remove Dis section----------------Gender War  You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum © 2007-2008 Informe.com. 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