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adi_dhoop Site Admin

Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 870
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Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:59 pm Post subject: masoom si khawaish |
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hai mere dil mai ik khwaish
nanhi si, masoom si
jo kero wada tum
usko pora kerne ka
toh bol doon
keh...........
rekh ker apne hath mere hathoon pe
ankhoon mai liy jout piyar ki
honthoon pe liy muskrahat piyar ki
aa ker qareeb mere
dheere se ker dou
mere kanoon mai ik sergoshi...............
suno.....
dhoop..tum meri ho
mere sapne tum se hain
mere jine ki rah ho tum
mere jism mai ho bassi
tum ik rooh ki tarhan _________________
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mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan VIP Member

Joined: 08 May 2007 Posts: 3118 Location: Lahore
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 8:48 am Post subject: |
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HMMMMMMMMMMM SAHI HAY
ACHA LIKHTI HO PER LIKHNAY KE BAAD USAY BAAR BAAR PARHA KARO AUR PHIR USAY AUR BAHTER KERNY KI KOSHISH KIA KARO DEN DEKHNA POETRY KO KITNA NIKHAR ATA HAY
AGAY BI TO KUCH LIKHTI ITNI JALDI KHATAM KAR DI YA AUR BI HY? _________________
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madho_74 Special Member

Joined: 23 Feb 2008 Posts: 655 Location: lahore
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:26 pm Post subject: Re: masoom si khawaish |
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| adi_dhoop wrote: | hai mere dil mai ik khwaish
nanhi si, masoom si
jo kero wada tum
usko pora kerne ka
toh bol doon
keh...........
rekh ker apne hath mere hathoon pe
ankhoon mai liy jout piyar ki
honthoon pe liy muskrahat piyar ki
aa ker qareeb mere
dheere se ker dou
mere kanoon mai ik sergoshi...............
suno.....
dhoop..tum meri ho
mere sapne tum se hain
mere jine ki rah ho tum
mere jism mai ho bassi
tum ik rooh ki tarhan |
GR888888888888 DHOP SISO
BOHAT ACHI HA :P _________________
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adi_dhoop Site Admin

Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 870
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:30 pm Post subject: Re: masoom si khawaish |
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| madho_74 wrote: | | adi_dhoop wrote: | hai mere dil mai ik khwaish
nanhi si, masoom si
jo kero wada tum
usko pora kerne ka
toh bol doon
keh...........
rekh ker apne hath mere hathoon pe
ankhoon mai liy jout piyar ki
honthoon pe liy muskrahat piyar ki
aa ker qareeb mere
dheere se ker dou
mere kanoon mai ik sergoshi...............
suno.....
dhoop..tum meri ho
mere sapne tum se hain
mere jine ki rah ho tum
mere jism mai ho bassi
tum ik rooh ki tarhan |
GR888888888888 DHOP SISO
BOHAT ACHI HA :P |
[color=orange]thanx madhooooooooooo....per tum se ziyada achi nai[/color] _________________
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adi_dhoop Site Admin

Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 870
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:32 pm Post subject: |
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| mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan wrote: | HMMMMMMMMMMM SAHI HAY
ACHA LIKHTI HO PER LIKHNAY KE BAAD USAY BAAR BAAR PARHA KARO AUR PHIR USAY AUR BAHTER KERNY KI KOSHISH KIA KARO DEN DEKHNA POETRY KO KITNA NIKHAR ATA HAY
AGAY BI TO KUCH LIKHTI ITNI JALDI KHATAM KAR DI YA AUR BI HY? |
thankoooooooooooooooo pal _________________
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Faizan Moderator

Joined: 05 May 2008 Posts: 324 Location: LAHORE
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 1:02 pm Post subject: Excellent |
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Excellent!!!!!!!!
ye hui na baat.......ab laga dar e dehr se kuch roshni aane lagi..! _________________
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madho_74 Special Member

Joined: 23 Feb 2008 Posts: 655 Location: lahore
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 1:03 pm Post subject: Re: masoom si khawaish |
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| adi_dhoop wrote: | | madho_74 wrote: | | adi_dhoop wrote: | hai mere dil mai ik khwaish
nanhi si, masoom si
jo kero wada tum
usko pora kerne ka
toh bol doon
keh...........
rekh ker apne hath mere hathoon pe
ankhoon mai liy jout piyar ki
honthoon pe liy muskrahat piyar ki
aa ker qareeb mere
dheere se ker dou
mere kanoon mai ik sergoshi...............
suno.....
dhoop..tum meri ho
mere sapne tum se hain
mere jine ki rah ho tum
mere jism mai ho bassi
tum ik rooh ki tarhan |
GR888888888888 DHOP SISO
BOHAT ACHI HA :P |
[color=orange]thanx madhooooooooooo....per tum se ziyada achi nai[/color] |
oOOOOOOooooOOOooooOOOOoo so sweet thats so kind of you _________________
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adi_dhoop Site Admin

Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 870
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 1:14 pm Post subject: Re: Excellent |
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| Faizan wrote: | Excellent!!!!!!!!
ye hui na baat.......ab laga dar e dehr se kuch roshni aane lagi..! |
wow ............thnx faizan...ager aap ne paas ker di tu iss ka matlab keh kuch sahi ki mai ne poetry.....thank u _________________
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CONS Advance Member
Joined: 29 Sep 2007 Posts: 923
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Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 10:56 am Post subject: |
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| hmmmm... |
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adi_dhoop Site Admin

Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 870
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Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 11:53 am Post subject: |
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hmmmm?
had hoti hai kanjoosi ki _________________
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soha_so_cute Family Member
Joined: 18 Jun 2008 Posts: 12 Location: Aazaad kashmir
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Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 6:49 pm Post subject: mai |
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main kuch kahoon aap ki poetry pr dhoop g aap bohoot acha likty ho bas aik kacha pan hai.. wo aap ka door ho jaye ga agar aap is forum k doosre achy poets ko perti rahin to. wish u best of luck _________________
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adi_dhoop Site Admin

Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 870
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Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 7:46 pm Post subject: Re: mai |
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| soha_so_cute wrote: | | main kuch kahoon aap ki poetry pr dhoop g aap bohoot acha likty ho bas aik kacha pan hai.. wo aap ka door ho jaye ga agar aap is forum k doosre achy poets ko perti rahin to. wish u best of luck |
THANKXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
MUJE ACHA LAGA AAP KA MASHWARA
KABHI AAP BHI KUCH LIKHIY
mai acha likhne ki koshish keroon gi _________________
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