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adi_dhoop
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:59 pm    Post subject: masoom si khawaish Reply with quote

hai mere dil mai ik khwaish
nanhi si, masoom si
jo kero wada tum
usko pora kerne ka
toh bol doon
keh...........
rekh ker apne hath mere hathoon pe
ankhoon mai liy jout piyar ki
honthoon pe liy muskrahat piyar ki
aa ker qareeb mere
dheere se ker dou
mere kanoon mai ik sergoshi...............
suno.....
dhoop..tum meri ho
mere sapne tum se hain
mere jine ki rah ho tum
mere jism mai ho bassi
tum ik rooh ki tarhan

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 8:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

HMMMMMMMMMMM SAHI HAY

ACHA LIKHTI HO PER LIKHNAY KE BAAD USAY BAAR BAAR PARHA KARO AUR PHIR USAY AUR BAHTER KERNY KI KOSHISH KIA KARO DEN DEKHNA POETRY KO KITNA NIKHAR ATA HAY Smile


AGAY BI TO KUCH LIKHTI ITNI JALDI KHATAM KAR DI YA AUR BI HY?

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:26 pm    Post subject: Re: masoom si khawaish Reply with quote

adi_dhoop wrote:
hai mere dil mai ik khwaish
nanhi si, masoom si
jo kero wada tum
usko pora kerne ka
toh bol doon
keh...........
rekh ker apne hath mere hathoon pe
ankhoon mai liy jout piyar ki
honthoon pe liy muskrahat piyar ki
aa ker qareeb mere
dheere se ker dou
mere kanoon mai ik sergoshi...............
suno.....
dhoop..tum meri ho
mere sapne tum se hain
mere jine ki rah ho tum
mere jism mai ho bassi
tum ik rooh ki tarhan





GR888888888888 DHOP SISO Cool
BOHAT ACHI HA :
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:30 pm    Post subject: Re: masoom si khawaish Reply with quote

madho_74 wrote:
adi_dhoop wrote:
hai mere dil mai ik khwaish
nanhi si, masoom si
jo kero wada tum
usko pora kerne ka
toh bol doon
keh...........
rekh ker apne hath mere hathoon pe
ankhoon mai liy jout piyar ki
honthoon pe liy muskrahat piyar ki
aa ker qareeb mere
dheere se ker dou
mere kanoon mai ik sergoshi...............
suno.....
dhoop..tum meri ho
mere sapne tum se hain
mere jine ki rah ho tum
mere jism mai ho bassi
tum ik rooh ki tarhan





GR888888888888 DHOP SISO Cool
BOHAT ACHI HA :
P







[color=orange]thanx madhooooooooooo....per tum se ziyada achi nai[/color]
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan wrote:
HMMMMMMMMMMM SAHI HAY

ACHA LIKHTI HO PER LIKHNAY KE BAAD USAY BAAR BAAR PARHA KARO AUR PHIR USAY AUR BAHTER KERNY KI KOSHISH KIA KARO DEN DEKHNA POETRY KO KITNA NIKHAR ATA HAY Smile


AGAY BI TO KUCH LIKHTI ITNI JALDI KHATAM KAR DI YA AUR BI HY?









thankoooooooooooooooo pal
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 1:02 pm    Post subject: Excellent Reply with quote

Excellent!!!!!!!!
ye hui na baat.......ab laga dar e dehr se kuch roshni aane lagi..!

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 1:03 pm    Post subject: Re: masoom si khawaish Reply with quote

adi_dhoop wrote:
madho_74 wrote:
adi_dhoop wrote:
hai mere dil mai ik khwaish
nanhi si, masoom si
jo kero wada tum
usko pora kerne ka
toh bol doon
keh...........
rekh ker apne hath mere hathoon pe
ankhoon mai liy jout piyar ki
honthoon pe liy muskrahat piyar ki
aa ker qareeb mere
dheere se ker dou
mere kanoon mai ik sergoshi...............
suno.....
dhoop..tum meri ho
mere sapne tum se hain
mere jine ki rah ho tum
mere jism mai ho bassi
tum ik rooh ki tarhan





GR888888888888 DHOP SISO Cool
BOHAT ACHI HA :
P







[color=orange]thanx madhooooooooooo....per tum se ziyada achi nai[/color]









oOOOOOOooooOOOooooOOOOoo so sweet thats so kind of you

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 1:14 pm    Post subject: Re: Excellent Reply with quote

Faizan wrote:
Excellent!!!!!!!!
ye hui na baat.......ab laga dar e dehr se kuch roshni aane lagi..!











wow ............thnx faizan...ager aap ne paas ker di tu iss ka matlab keh kuch sahi ki mai ne poetry.....thank u
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 10:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hmmmm...
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 11:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

CONS wrote:
hmmmm...




hmmmm?
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 6:49 pm    Post subject: mai Reply with quote

main kuch kahoon aap ki poetry pr dhoop g aap bohoot acha likty ho bas aik kacha pan hai.. wo aap ka door ho jaye ga agar aap is forum k doosre achy poets ko perti rahin to. wish u best of luck
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 7:46 pm    Post subject: Re: mai Reply with quote

soha_so_cute wrote:
main kuch kahoon aap ki poetry pr dhoop g aap bohoot acha likty ho bas aik kacha pan hai.. wo aap ka door ho jaye ga agar aap is forum k doosre achy poets ko perti rahin to. wish u best of luck


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KABHI AAP BHI KUCH LIKHIY
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