| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Message |
warda
Designer
Joined: 29 Sep 2007
Posts: 144
|
 Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 8:52 pm Post subject: main shaira to nahi magar a hasee,n........ |
 |
|
jab room khaali khaali rehna laga hai to kuch to karna hi pare ga.
par aap log pareshaan na ho,n yahaa,n ko best poetry mile gi INSHA ALLAH
aur yeh tori si main ne bhi kwshish ki hai agar pasand naa aye to bhi khaer hai kiu ki main koi shaira to nahi..........
 |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
Buble
Advance Member
Joined: 20 Aug 2007
Posts: 668
|
| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 4:19 am Post subject: |
|
|
nice collection warda
_________________
 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan
VIP Member
Joined: 08 May 2007
Posts: 3338
Location: Lahore
|
| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 9:46 am Post subject: Re: main shaira to nahi magar a hasee,n........ |
|
|
| warda wrote: |
jab room khaali khaali rehna laga hai to kuch to karna hi pare ga.
par aap log pareshaan na ho,n yahaa,n ko best poetry mile gi INSHA ALLAH
aur yeh tori si main ne bhi kwshish ki hai agar pasand naa aye to bhi khaer hai kiu ki main koi shaira to nahi..........
|
aahan zabardast warda nice sharing 
keep it up!
bauhat achi hein sab hi
nice work u do!
_________________
 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Nidu
Moderator
Joined: 18 May 2007
Posts: 2980
Location: Lahore
|
| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 9:02 pm Post subject: |
|
|
w.salaam
NICE SHARING!
_________________
 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Khamosh-Saya
Guest
|
| Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 12:11 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Hmmm
Bohat Achi
But Warda Aik post ko AIk hi jaga post kiya karoo
or Sahi jaga per Please
Tumhari ye Post Diffrent Section main post hai
Its a Rule |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Roshini
Advance Member
Joined: 11 Jun 2007
Posts: 711
|
| Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 10:12 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| nice collection Warda, sab se acha tu subject hai "main shairaa tu nahi..." |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Noshi
Moderator
Joined: 07 Sep 2007
Posts: 1147
Location: Lahore
|
| Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 1:57 pm Post subject: Re: main shaira to nahi magar a hasee,n........ |
|
|
| warda wrote: |
aur yeh tori si main ne bhi koshish ki hai agar pasand naa aye to bhi khaer hai kiu ki main koi shaira to nahi..........
|
Warda yeh readable nahi hai.
plz isy reedit karoo.
Fir comment karon gye.
n guide b karon gye.
_________________
 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Noshi
Moderator
Joined: 07 Sep 2007
Posts: 1147
Location: Lahore
|
| Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 2:42 pm Post subject: |
|
|
N rest of poetry is A1.
Zabardast
_________________
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
manahil_cutegirl
Site Admin
Joined: 13 May 2007
Posts: 3158
Location: *~* Їή ΡεŏÞļę Ħεăřt*~*
|
| Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 2:07 pm Post subject: |
|
|
zaberdast
_________________
 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
