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madho_74
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barason ke baad dekhaa ik shaKhs dilrubaa saa
ab zahan main nahin ha par naam thaa bhalaa saa
abaru khinche khinche se aankhen jhukii jhukii sii
baten rukii rukii sii lahaja thaka thaka saa
alfaaz the ke jugnuu aavaaz ke safar main
ban jaye jangalon main jis tarah rasta sa
Khvabon main Khvab us ke yaadon main yaad us kii
niindon main ghul gayaa ho jaise ke ratjaga sa
pahale bhii log aaye kitane hi zindagii main
vo hr tarah se lekin auron se thaa judaa saa
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justlove_leo_waqas
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| nIce poetry madam... |
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madho_74
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thanks Mr.......................
itny dino bad
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justlove_leo_waqas
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| Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 8:15 pm Post subject: |
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| madho_74 wrote: | thanks Mr.......................
itny dino bad |
WELCOME Madam......... 
bas time nahi mil raha thaa ... likin ab theek hain aur HAan ek baat k yaha sab he yaad rakhte hain khas kar PAL aur AAP |
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madho_74
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| Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 8:21 pm Post subject: |
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| justlove_leo_waqas wrote: | | madho_74 wrote: | thanks Mr.......................
itny dino bad |
WELCOME Madam.........
bas time nahi mil raha thaa ... likin ab theek hain aur HAan ek baat k yaha sab he yaad rakhte hain khas kar PAL aur AAP |
thanxx Mr.....
thats so nice of you
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justlove_leo_waqas
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| madho_74 wrote: | | justlove_leo_waqas wrote: | | madho_74 wrote: | thanks Mr.......................
itny dino bad |
WELCOME Madam.........
bas time nahi mil raha thaa ... likin ab theek hain aur HAan ek baat k yaha sab he yaad rakhte hain khas kar PAL aur AAP |
thanxx Mr.....
thats so nice of you |
Shukariya tuu aap sab k Miss ... |
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madho_74
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| justlove_leo_waqas wrote: | | madho_74 wrote: | | justlove_leo_waqas wrote: | | madho_74 wrote: | thanks Mr.......................
itny dino bad |
WELCOME Madam.........
bas time nahi mil raha thaa ... likin ab theek hain aur HAan ek baat k yaha sab he yaad rakhte hain khas kar PAL aur AAP |
thanxx Mr.....
thats so nice of you |
Shukariya tuu aap sab k Miss ... |
you are wc Mr...........
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arshad
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| Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 4:48 am Post subject: |
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niceeeeeeeeeee 1 keep it up   |
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madho_74
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| arshad wrote: | | niceeeeeeeeeee 1 keep it up |
thanks arshad baz aao acha
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madho_74
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qurbaton mein bhi judai ke zamane mange
dil vo bemar k rone ke bahaane maange
apana ye haal ke ji haar chuke luT bhii chuke
aur muhabbat vahii andaaz puraane maange
ham na hote to kisii aur ke charche hote
khalqat-e-shahar to kehne ko fasaane maange
dil kisii haal pe mane hi nahi jaan-e-'Faraz'
mil gaye tum bhii to kyaa aur na jaane mange
i just love this gazal this is vryyyyyyyyyyyyy good
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justlove_leo_waqas
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| madho_74 wrote: | qurbaton mein bhi judai ke zamane mange
dil vo bemar k rone ke bahaane maange
apana ye haal ke ji haar chuke luT bhii chuke
aur muhabbat vahii andaaz puraane maange
ham na hote to kisii aur ke charche hote
khalqat-e-shahar to kehne ko fasaane maange
dil kisii haal pe mane hi nahi jaan-e-'Faraz'
mil gaye tum bhii to kyaa aur na jaane mange
i just love this gazal this is vryyyyyyyyyyyyy good |
Its Gr8 Miss madho N Tussi wii ......... |
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madho_74
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| Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:39 pm Post subject: |
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thankssssssssssss
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aiqan-e-gohar
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| Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 5:42 pm Post subject: |
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| Madho nice poetry collection mado bohat achhi hai nice work cutooo |
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madho_74
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| Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 8:00 pm Post subject: |
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| aiqan-e-gohar wrote: | | Madho nice poetry collection mado bohat achhi hai nice work cutooo |
thanks alot sweet dhanii
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arshad
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| Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 3:00 pm Post subject: |
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
zaberdastttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
tussi tay kamaaaaaal ker dittaaaaaaaaaa |
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