FAQ   Search   Memberlist   Usergroups   Register   Profile   Log in to check your private messages   Log in  Koi to ho jo... Goto page 1, 2, 3, 4  Next          PtvChat Where Fun Never ENds... !! www.ptvchat.com Forum Index -> Andaz-e-Bayan Or View previous topic :: View next topic   Author Message Faizan Moderator Joined: 05 May 2008 Posts: 329 Location: LAHORE Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 1:38 pm    Post subject: Koi to ho jo... Koi to ho jo wafa ki soorat... Mera ho ik humnawa ki soorat... Nawa ho us me haya ki soorat.. Magar haya me rida ki soorat... Nigah me ho ik ada ki soorat.. Badan me utre hawa ki soorat.. Na aankhen uski hon teer jaisi.. Na zulfein uski ghata ki soorat.. Na chehra beshak gulab sa ho.. Na lab hon us ke Quba ki soorat.. Magar mehk jaye mera jewan.. Chalan ho uska hina ki soorat.. Mujhe to ik wasf bhaye us ka... Ho dil me sidq aur safa ki soorat.. _________________ Back to top mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan VIP Member Joined: 08 May 2007 Posts: 3338 Location: Lahore Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 4:16 pm    Post subject: hmmmmmmmmmmm nICe oNE Faizi _________________ Back to top Faizan Moderator Joined: 05 May 2008 Posts: 329 Location: LAHORE Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 1:46 pm    Post subject: thanx thanx alot![/b] _________________ Back to top sweet dreams Family Member Joined: 05 Apr 2008 Posts: 69 Location: rawalpindi Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 6:15 pm    Post subject: bht achyy....!!! very very nice.................!!! bht hi khoobsoorat very well done i like it..... but ye likhi kis k liye hai g..............!!!!!! Back to top Faizan Moderator Joined: 05 May 2008 Posts: 329 Location: LAHORE Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 11:32 pm    Post subject: kia chupa hai? mera kisi se kia chupa hai..... thanx for admiring _________________ Back to top Romana101 Family Member Joined: 07 Jun 2008 Posts: 24 Location: Lahore Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 11:13 pm    Post subject: ooowow zabardast Faizan aap to kamaal kartey hain sachiiiiiiiii.... _________________ Romana Back to top adi_dhoop Site Admin Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 909 Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 8:52 am    Post subject: hmmmmmmmmm....nice poem...keep sharing.. _________________ Back to top Romana101 Family Member Joined: 07 Jun 2008 Posts: 24 Location: Lahore Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 8:35 pm    Post subject: dhoop dhoop tumhein bhi pasand hay Faizan ki poetry? aor tum garmi ki dhoop ho ya sardiyoun waali? _________________ Romana Back to top madho_74 Special Member Joined: 23 Feb 2008 Posts: 664 Location: lahore Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 10:16 am    Post subject: Re: Koi to ho jo... Faizan wrote: Koi to ho jo wafa ki soorat... Mera ho ik humnawa ki soorat... Nawa ho us me haya ki soorat.. Magar haya me rida ki soorat... Nigah me ho ik ada ki soorat.. Badan me utre hawa ki soorat.. Na aankhen uski hon teer jaisi.. Na zulfein uski ghata ki soorat.. Na chehra beshak gulab sa ho.. Na lab hon us ke Quba ki soorat.. Magar mehk jaye mera jewan.. Chalan ho uska hina ki soorat.. Mujhe to ik wasf bhaye us ka... Ho dil me sidq aur safa ki soorat.. bohat achi ha bhaya ap ko shyer kis ne banya i mean ye acha kam kis ne kia _________________ Back to top Faizan Moderator Joined: 05 May 2008 Posts: 329 Location: LAHORE Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 10:29 am    Post subject: hnmmmm sab achy kaam Allah se hi mansoob hain behna ji.... _________________ Back to top arshad Advance Member Joined: 31 Aug 2007 Posts: 983 Location: Saudia Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 11:08 am    Post subject: nice faizan brooo,, keep it up Back to top adi_dhoop Site Admin Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 909 Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 11:50 am    Post subject: Re: dhoop Romana101 wrote: dhoop tumhein bhi pasand hay Faizan ki poetry? aor tum garmi ki dhoop ho ya sardiyoun waali? romana mai serma ki dhoop hoon...jis mai log bethna passand kerte hain...mongphali,chalghoze or kino khate hain...nai wo dhoop hoon....or fizan acha likhte hain ...i think sub ko un ki poetry passand hai... _________________ Back to top madho_74 Special Member Joined: 23 Feb 2008 Posts: 664 Location: lahore Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:27 pm    Post subject: Re: hnmmmm Faizan wrote: sab achy kaam Allah se hi mansoob hain behna ji.... GOD BLESS YOU _________________ Back to top aaira Moderator Joined: 13 Apr 2008 Posts: 221 Location: karachi Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:38 pm    Post subject: ohhhh faizan bhai app tu barey ho achey shair nikleain ab jaldi se bata dain apni behan ko koun acha lag gaya hai app ko jo app majnoon ki tarhan shaireen kerne lagain hain Back to top Faizan Moderator Joined: 05 May 2008 Posts: 329 Location: LAHORE Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 8:43 am    Post subject: ammi mujhe kon acha lag gaya hai???????????????????????????????? . . . . . . . . . . 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