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Ak
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 Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 9:08 pm Post subject: kia Tamasha Ho |
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main apni zaat main bikhroo to kia tamasha ho
main apnay apny ap sy uljhoon to kia tamasha ho
ab to her dil mehkta hai meri socho sy
main apni soch main simtooo to kia tamasha ho
is ki laa mehdood gehrai ko jannay k liye
main apny dil main agar utrooo to kia tamasha ho
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Faizan
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| Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 8:25 am Post subject: wow |
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 wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quddoos bhai kamaaaaall hai .......... great!
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Ak
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| Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 10:47 am Post subject: Re: wow |
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| Faizan wrote: | | wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quddoos bhai kamaaaaall hai .......... great! |
Faizan sahab kamal to ap k ilfaz karty hai hum to sirf ap sy seekhna chahty hai |
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Faizan
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| Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:22 pm Post subject: kiyun |
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hahahaha.. kiyun sharminda karte ho ji.. aur consult to ham kar hi sakte hain ek doosre se.. 
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shji
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| Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 10:59 am Post subject: |
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| niceeeeeeeee.... khoob likha ha app nai... deapth ha detail ha wow... |
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Ak
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| Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 11:28 am Post subject: |
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| shji wrote: | | niceeeeeeeee.... khoob likha ha app nai... deapth ha detail ha wow... |
aap ka Nazar hussan hai k app is ki depth main gay bohat shukria |
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adi_dhoop
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| Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 1:46 pm Post subject: |
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wowwwwwowowowooowwwwwwwwwwwwooooWWWWWOoooooooooowwwwwwwwwwooooooooooWWWWWWWWWWooooOOOOOOOOOOOwwwwwww
ALLAH pak ne tou aik bahut hi achi poet bhej diya iss forum p
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Ak
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| Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 2:02 pm Post subject: |
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| adi_dhoop wrote: | wowwwwwowowowooowwwwwwwwwwwwooooWWWWWOoooooooooowwwwwwwwwwooooooooooWWWWWWWWWWooooOOOOOOOOOOOwwwwwww
ALLAH pak ne tou aik bahut hi achi poet bhej diya iss forum p |
Jeety raho mujhy is qabil samjny walo lekin sach yeh hai k main poet nahi hoon bas yohi apny khyalat ko ilfaz ka rang deta hoon r jo kuch samnay ata hai aap logo k hazoor pash kar deta hoonor to main kuch bhi nahi hoon |
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CONS
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| Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 6:21 pm Post subject: |
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hmm yeh zameen aap ki nahi hay ghaliban  kuch yad nahi aaraha yeh poori ghazal hay aap nay apna plot khara kardia phirr bhi good try |
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sweet dreams
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| Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 10:41 pm Post subject: hmmm |
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| greatttttttttttttttttt.......!!!! |
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