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adi_dhoop
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 Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 8:54 pm Post subject: khwab jhooty kissi ko......... |
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Khawab Jhootay Kissi Ko Dikhaya Nahi Kertay
Meeri Jaan! Youn Kisi Ko Satya Nahi Kertay
Aik Baar Youn Kisi Ko Keh Ker Apna
Daman Phir Uss Say Churaya Nahi Kertay
Uskay Intezar Say Bhala Kia Ho Ga Hassil
Annay Ka Keh Ker Bhi Joo Aya Nahi Kertay
Rekhtay Hoon Jo Derd Bhara Dil Apnay Seenay
Dosroon Ka Dil Phir Woh Dookhaya Nahi Kertay
Doo Qadam Sath Chaal Ker Jo Juda Hoo Jaien
Aysay Loggon Ko Tu Humsafar Banya Nahi Kertay
Kistarha Guzarti Ho Gi Zindagi Unki
Pehli Muhabbat Ko Jo Dil Say Bhulaya Nahi Kertay
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mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan
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| Posted: Fri May 30, 2008 11:50 am Post subject: |
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yaar yea poetry mai ne suni hui hay i think.
kya yea tum ne likhi hay???????????
aur han ager yea tum ne nahi likhi hui to phir isay Mehfil-e-MOshaira main share karo 
aur ager tum ne likhi hui hay to it's superbbbbbbbb:)
aur yahan per wo poetry share karo jo tum ne khud likhi hein
Allah BleSs U Forever:)
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CONS
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| Posted: Fri May 30, 2008 5:50 pm Post subject: |
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| its wonder full ( wohi bat kay agar apni hay tu ) other wise its not good buri battttt |
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adi_dhoop
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| Posted: Fri May 30, 2008 7:01 pm Post subject: |
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| CONS wrote: | | its wonder full ( wohi bat kay agar apni hay tu ) other wise its not good buri battttt |
bori baat tu tub ho kh jub main kahoon kh ye main ny likhi hai....ye tu meri collections main sy hai....main ny tu SHARE ki hai....any way thnx for giving me attention and suggestion... |
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mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan
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| Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 9:46 am Post subject: |
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  :p
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its_chahat
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| Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 12:32 pm Post subject: |
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| niceeeeeeeeeeee |
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shji
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| WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH khob janab |
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arshad
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| Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 11:07 am Post subject: |
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| niceeeeeeee jis ki bhi hai laiken yahaan plzzz apni likhiii post karain thanxxx for posting |
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adi_dhoop
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| arshad wrote: | | niceeeeeeee jis ki bhi hai laiken yahaan plzzz apni likhiii post karain thanxxx for posting |
ji bahut shukria aap ka guide kerny ka...next time care karoon gi...aap i think 3rd hain jo mujy gide ker rahy hain..  |
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arshad
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| Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 10:41 am Post subject: |
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| naa hii miss main kya guid karoon ga mujay kuch aata hi nahi shayery k mutallaq,, main ne to shayery main wazan daalna ho to khana zayaada khaa laita hooon |
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