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Faizan Moderator

Joined: 05 May 2008 Posts: 327 Location: LAHORE
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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 10:56 am Post subject: Kaho to..! |
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Kisi apne se haal e dil kaho to..
Tumhen na mil saki manzil kaho to..
Ky mai bhi hun isi Noha gari me..
Tum apne dard me shaamil kaho to..
Maseeha to nahi koi yahan per..
Humen phir bhi kisi Qaabil kaho to..
Humari zeest bhi aasan kahan ho..
Agar Mushkil ko tum Mushkil kaho to..! _________________
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arshad Moderator

Joined: 31 Aug 2007 Posts: 983 Location: Saudia
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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 11:28 am Post subject: |
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nice 1 Faizan broooooooooooo ,,, very Gud |
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adi_dhoop Site Admin

Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 890
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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 1:54 pm Post subject: |
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niceeeeeeeeee faizan........ _________________
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mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan VIP Member

Joined: 08 May 2007 Posts: 3200 Location: Lahore
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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 2:17 pm Post subject: |
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hmmmmmm Zabardast:) _________________
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Faizan Moderator

Joined: 05 May 2008 Posts: 327 Location: LAHORE
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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 10:38 pm Post subject: thanx |
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thanx arshad thanx dhoop thanx pal.................... THANX all _________________
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adi_dhoop Site Admin

Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 890
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Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 1:21 am Post subject: |
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u welcome _________________
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CONS Moderator
Joined: 29 Sep 2007 Posts: 932
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Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 9:14 am Post subject: |
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nice one
HER SHAIR TUMHARA NAZER MAY QABIL-E-DAD TAHRAY GA
AGAY KOI NAZM, SHAIR,YA GHAZL-E- GHA'IL KAHO TU  |
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Faizan Moderator

Joined: 05 May 2008 Posts: 327 Location: LAHORE
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Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 9:37 am Post subject: thanx |
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thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanx! _________________
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madho_74 Special Member

Joined: 23 Feb 2008 Posts: 655 Location: lahore
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Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 7:57 pm Post subject: |
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hmmmmmmmmm..............
acha to ye bat ha
well bat ye ha k bohat achi poetry ha
God bless you bhyeo
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDD
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Faizan Moderator

Joined: 05 May 2008 Posts: 327 Location: LAHORE
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 9:08 am Post subject: thanx |
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thanx behnaaaaaaaa.............
THaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanX!!!!!!!! _________________
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madho_74 Special Member

Joined: 23 Feb 2008 Posts: 655 Location: lahore
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:25 pm Post subject: Re: thanx |
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| Faizan wrote: | thanx behnaaaaaaaa.............
THaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanX!!!!!!!! |
you are wc bhayaaaaaaaaaaaa...........
WELLCOMEEEEEEE.............. _________________
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soha_so_cute Family Member
Joined: 18 Jun 2008 Posts: 16 Location: Aazaad kashmir
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Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 7:05 pm Post subject: wah |
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wah wah kia accha likhty hain aap dil khush kar dety hain mera to mashwara hay book publish karwa dein ham jaisy deewano i mean fans ky liye. _________________
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Faizan Moderator

Joined: 05 May 2008 Posts: 327 Location: LAHORE
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Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 10:23 am Post subject: Re: wah |
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| soha_so_cute wrote: | wah wah kia accha likhty hain aap dil khush kar dety hain mera to mashwara hay book publish karwa dein ham jaisy deewano i mean fans ky liye. |
soha ji i have no wish to be famous aur book ka sochen ge kabhi... thanx for admiring.. _________________
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aiqan-e-gohar Moderator

Joined: 24 Jun 2008 Posts: 366 Location: kitaabon aur khayalon main
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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 8:24 am Post subject: Re: Kaho to..! |
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| Faizan wrote: | Kisi apne se haal e dil kaho to..
Tumhen na mil saki manzil kaho to..
Ky mai bhi hun isi Noha gari me..
Tum apne dard me shaamil kaho to..
Maseeha to nahi koi yahan per..
Humen phir bhi kisi Qaabil kaho to..
Humari zeest bhi aasan kahan ho..
Agar Mushkil ko tum Mushkil kaho to..! |
IS it your own creation i'm shocked
Bohat achhi hai Waise mujhe poetry main itna interest tou nahi hai lekin aap ne bohat achha likha hai
best of luck n keep it up FAIZAN BHAAI |
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soha_so_cute Family Member
Joined: 18 Jun 2008 Posts: 16 Location: Aazaad kashmir
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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 8:51 pm Post subject: haal e dil |
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Kisi apne se haal e dil kaho to..
Tumhen na mil saki manzil kaho to..
Ky mai bhi hun isi Noha gari me..
Tum apne dard me shaamil kaho to..
Maseeha to nahi koi yahan per..
Humen phir bhi kisi Qaabil kaho to..
Humari zeest bhi aasan kahan ho..
Agar Mushkil ko tum Mushkil kaho to..!
aji jaan lain na haal ay dil.. kahey bina hi _________________
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