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Faizan Moderator

Joined: 05 May 2008 Posts: 327 Location: LAHORE
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Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 11:35 am Post subject: aur ... |
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kaanton bhare bichone ka apna hi maza hai
In siskiyon me sone ka apna hi maza hai
Her shakhs pe guftaar me muskan lutana
Dil me udaas hone ka apna hi maza hai
aaye tifl e na samajh tujhe ye nahi maloom
toote hue khilone ka apna hi maza hai
apno k lye rona to ik fitri amar hai
ghairon k gham me rone ka apna hi maza hai
Hum ne use paya nahi lekin na jane kyun
paye bina hi khone ka apna hi maza hai
Faizan jaan k jane se mat yun udaas ho
Gham se farar hone ka apna hi maza hai _________________
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its_chahat Site Admin

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Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 2:20 pm Post subject: |
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nicccceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee _________________
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Faizan Moderator

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Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 4:37 pm Post subject: thanx |
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THanX!!!!!!!!!! _________________
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CONS Moderator
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Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 1:13 pm Post subject: |
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wah kia bat hay faizan sahab aap kanto say ronay say udasi say mazay lay rahay hain aur hamay aap ki ghazal parhnay say maza lay rahay hain
achi hay balance hay khas kar yeh do shair
"apno k lye rona to ik fitri amar hai
ghairon k gham me rone ka apna hi maza hai
Hum ne use paya nahi lekin na jane kyun
paye bina hi khone ka apna hi maza hai " |
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manahil_cutegirl Site Admin

Joined: 13 May 2007 Posts: 3168 Location: *~* Їή ΡεŏÞļę Ħεăřt*~*
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 11:49 am Post subject: |
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Zabardast:) _________________
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Faizan Moderator

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Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 1:24 am Post subject: thanx |
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thanx cons thanx chahat and thanx manahil you all are very nice....... _________________
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sweet dreams Family Member
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Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 1:23 pm Post subject: bht achyyyyyyyy.zabardats..... |
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veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice
bht bht achy
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Faizan Moderator

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Posted: Sat May 24, 2008 11:08 pm Post subject: Thanx |
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special thanx sweet dreamz .............. _________________
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Faizan Moderator

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Posted: Sat May 24, 2008 11:18 pm Post subject: Thanx |
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special thanx sweet dreamz .............. _________________
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Romana101 Family Member

Joined: 07 Jun 2008 Posts: 24 Location: Lahore
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Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 11:23 pm Post subject: aur |
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aor aap ko perhney ka bhi apna hi maza hay Great sir! solute u. _________________ Romana |
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manahil_cutegirl Site Admin

Joined: 13 May 2007 Posts: 3168 Location: *~* Їή ΡεŏÞļę Ħεăřt*~*
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 3:21 pm Post subject: Re: thanx |
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| Faizan wrote: | thanx cons thanx chahat and thanx manahil you all are very nice....... |
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mei_hoon_is_pal_yahan VIP Member

Joined: 08 May 2007 Posts: 3188 Location: Lahore
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 9:54 am Post subject: Re: aur ... |
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| Faizan wrote: | kaanton bhare bichone ka apna hi maza hai
In siskiyon me sone ka apna hi maza hai
Her shakhs pe guftaar me muskan lutana
Dil me udaas hone ka apna hi maza hai
aaye tifl e na samajh tujhe ye nahi maloom
toote hue khilone ka apna hi maza hai
apno k lye rona to ik fitri amar hai
ghairon k gham me rone ka apna hi maza hai
Hum ne use paya nahi lekin na jane kyun
paye bina hi khone ka apna hi maza hai
Faizan jaan k jane se mat yun udaas ho
Gham se farar hone ka apna hi maza hai |
Zabardast;) yaar tareef karna aab zaroori nahi tum us se kafi uper ki poetry likhty hO SO
LIkhty raho ALlah BLeSs u _________________
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adi_dhoop Site Admin

Joined: 23 May 2008 Posts: 879
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 12:12 pm Post subject: Re: aur ... |
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[quote="Faizan"]kaanton bhare bichone ka apna hi maza hai
In siskiyon me sone ka apna hi maza hai
Her shakhs pe guftaar me muskan lutana
Dil me udaas hone ka apna hi maza hai
aaye tifl e na samajh tujhe ye nahi maloom
toote hue khilone ka apna hi maza hai
apno k lye rona to ik fitri amar hai
ghairon k gham me rone ka apna hi maza hai
Hum ne use paya nahi lekin na jane kyun
paye bina hi khone ka apna hi maza hai
Faizan jaan k jane se mat yun udaas ho
Gham se farar hone ka apna hi maza hai[
nice....and...zaberdast...keep sharing _________________
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Romana101 Family Member

Joined: 07 Jun 2008 Posts: 24 Location: Lahore
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 8:29 pm Post subject: yes! |
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main har roz perhti hon sach roz man karta hay ky aap ki poetry perhon..... kya kar sakti hon baat karney ka naseeb nahin na maira to bus yehi hay jis sey dil behla lon.. _________________ Romana |
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soha_so_cute Family Member
Joined: 18 Jun 2008 Posts: 16 Location: Aazaad kashmir
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Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 6:50 pm Post subject: wow |
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Faizan aap toh aik mukammal poet hain main aap sey seekhna chaahoon gee..... sikha dain gey?please _________________
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